OOC Role Play Ideas and Talk

[Qtchi]

*pops back in*

Hullo! Hullo! Boy is life busy! I'm trying to figure out how to respond to the threads. A bright era is on a stand-still until TBH and El do their little dance. Personally, I think it's probably easier if someone just started a food fight in the main hall...but I guess things are done in a more refined manner then what Q is accustomed to.

Of course, with Q in the mix, nothing ever goes the way it's planned...

The Long Road post is... umm... coming.

And A Guardians Duty will move forward as soon as Reens completes her post. This is precisely why we do not put a BRB sign on your posts. You either post all at once or you not at all.

*grumbles*

Oh and thank you for the birthday wishes!!

[Vuxxa]

Q, how could you say that. You know full well that i dont do things in a refined manner

[Qtchi]

*arches an eyebrow in the air*


O' really? Is that a challenge I hear John?

[Vuxxa]

Hmm, I suppose your thinking the same thing that i'm thinking. Ok then, Let's do this Jane.

[Qtchi]

*grins maliciously*

Bring it on sweet pea.
This might sting a little...




Oh and Happy (American) Thanksgiving Folks!
I thanked God today for blessing my life with so many things - like wifii, Starbuck's and a brain.

[Vuxxa]

oh cupcake, is this not what you asked for, or should i say, begged for
oh well, I suppose i will have to embarass you in front of all these nice people.

And as for the sting you mentioned I'm afraid your threat is as infantile as the words scrowled across your shirt.



And of course Today is (American) Thanksgiving. So Happy Thanksgiving all.

[Qtchi]

Stop staring at my- er, words...


You'll trip again, Buttercup.

[Vuxxa]

How dare you mention me tripping. What happened on those stairs should have stayed on those stairs. Well, you have a point. Yes and the uh,words did not make me trip. And I apologize your "words" are not infantile.

And i can stare at your "words" as much as i like Sweety

I think I'm going to kill myself out of it.... It's too much,I just spent 3 months in hell..... gotta go back in 3 days.....

[ketotsue]

*looks at the posts* Uhm Q I would like to know where this A long road your in is at because from where im sitting there hasn't been a post in it for about two and a half weeks.

[Qtchi]

*chuckles darkly*

Better not stare too hard peanut. You might run into a wall...

*bops Vuxxa's head then wanders away to write a post for Ket*

Ah, I hope you feel better Reens

*hugs*

Don't worry about the RP. If you can't post, then we'll just have the people in the thread veer their interests elsewhere. I'm pretty busy in RL myself, so I haven't been pushing the thread forward. When I have some free time, I'll write some more. If anything, I can turn it into a story and close off the RP. Don't worry about it.

Edit: Okay... posted everywhere. Weee~~~

*cheers, then scampers to freedom*

[Vuxxa]

You know you did'nt have to do that Jade

[Qtchi]

It's okay Jeff.

I had some free time and a sudden burst of writing lust. You should see the other forums...

[Vuxxa]

Good job Mary.

There, finally, DONE!!! I think I might've god modded a little, but I'm not sure. Does a Time-frozen Necronas-in-my-horse count as a character? I just sent him to heaven.... not literally.

[Qtchi]

*chuckles*

It's alright... I'm sure there's a way he can write himself outta the slight GM'ing. Don't worry about needing to post all the time. If you can't then just participate whenever you can. The story is pretty flexible...

[Vuxxa]

Proteggere da il Sacro Trinity
Patris, et Filii, Et Spiritus Sancti
E mio schermo Ÿ il Schermo del Sacro Trinitê
Mio spada essere il parola del il pi sacro.
Il giorni diritto dovere essere provare
Noi dovere prevalere , e il oscuritê recedere da nostro occhi

Maggio il sacro esercito essere forte e trionfo superiore il depravato uno.

[Qtchi]

Originally Posted by Vuxxa

...his feet leave the ground as hs head now plummeted for the ground...

Jack, you might want to edit that.

Head first plummet to the ground results in severe spine damage and possibility of long-term comma if you don't die instantly... Usually writers write something like:

He was jerked off his feet, his eyes wide as his body shifted past the girl at an alarming speed. At this rate, he was going to hit the ground head-first if he didn't react quick enough. Shifting his shoulders, he twisted his body around and latched onto her wrist, pulling her alongside his own descent.

[Vuxxa]

Count your blessings. If it weren't for my quick actions Vuxxa would not be talking to you right now. Instead somebody who isn't very nice would. Ketotsue should know who I'm talking about.

Originally Posted by Qtchi

Jack, you might want to edit that.

Head first plummet to the ground results in severe spine damage and possibility of long-term comma if you don't die instantly... Usually writers write something like:

He was jerked off his feet, his eyes wide as his body shifted past the girl at an alarming speed. At this rate, he was going to hit the ground head-first if he didn't react quick enough. Shifting his shoulders, he twisted his body around and latched onto her wrist, pulling her alongside his own descent.

If nothing else, edit it so that it doesn't say ground so often. Hell, when I'm writing, I try not to say "Ehlmaris", "the King", or "the Paladin" more than once each per paragraph. I'd have written that line more like:

"his feet leave the (soil/stone/wood/whatever flooring there is in this setting) as his head now plummets for the ground"

Also, another thing I didn't realize until I typed that is you used a present-tense verb - leave - and then the present-tense "now" prior to using the past-tense verb "plummeted". Verb tenses, people! Pay attention to them!

Additionally, guys, in ALL writing, it makes it more exciting to always use present-tense. For example, if there's a massive war that threatens the safety of the world, past-tense implies that someone or something survived to chronicle the events. Present leaves the future uncertain and puts the reader right where the action is and, if the reader is immersed enough in the fictional world, leaves readers fearing for their own safety until their minds return to reality.

Okay, that's enough English-major thinking (perhaps bitching or whining would be better) for now. Hell, semester's over. At least this shows I've learned something...